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    Post by claudicici Sat Feb 20, 2010 7:03 pm

    Bringing over maunsapt's poems from another thread.I think they were getting lost there...
    Terradiddling

    If I said I swam the seven seas
    Or flew up high with golden wings
    I’d be a terradiddling for certain
    For I know I cannot do these things

    If I said I saw the Jolly Green Giant
    Or sailed with the Captain Hook
    I’d be a terradiddling for certain
    For I know I’d never undertook

    If I said I yodeled for King Arthur
    Or cooked a banquet for a million
    I’d be a terradiddling for certain
    For I know I’d be in a state of lyin’

    ©️Copyright 10 February 2010
    MahTame

    (terradiddle = 1. A petty falsehood; a fib.
    2. Pretentious nonsense.)
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    A Whacked Billet-Doux

    I’ve got a billet-doux
    And it’s all whacked out
    Words been said to you

    Words ‘n letters and such
    Might seem to whack out
    Saying a little is too much

    For your information
    I can be a bit whacky
    With sleep deprivation

    All ‘n all, this ‘n that
    I misreckoned; it’s whacked
    Now I’ll end this chit-chat

    ©️Copyright 14 February 2010
    MahTame

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    ‘Mornin’

    Soft melodies
    Songs of life
    Doves coo
    Ignoring strife

    Classical tunes
    Sounds echo
    Birdies sing
    To folks below

    Cheery sounds
    Dawn’s debut
    Greetings given
    ‘Mornin’ to you

    ©️Copyright
    13 February 2010
    MahTame
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    A Warrior’s Return

    On top of mountain
    Throughout the valley
    Whispering winds call
    On eagle’s wings they fly

    Searching for a sign
    In seasons upon seasons
    A shadowy figure comes
    From afar in the distance

    Hands reach out
    Into the horizon
    A love has returned
    From oceans down yon

    Beloved souls
    Forever intertwine
    Her warrior has come
    Home from an unknown land

    Dances with song
    Eyes connecting
    Souls touch the loss
    Comfort with each embracing

    Love you
    Don’t you know?
    The depths settling
    Beyond the journey’s you go?

    ©️Copyright 25 November 2009
    MahTame

    Inspired by “Opera” – Himalaya Soundtrack



    alot of my work, along with some friend's work is at my website: http://www.freewebs.com/mahtame
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    Post by Guest Sat Feb 20, 2010 8:23 pm

    kewl. i could post some more if folks would like. and i'd be interested in reading anybody else's writings as well Wink

    (i usually sign my work with my shortened Kiowa name: MahTame = teacher

    my long name is: MahTameDayAhnttAhGyAh ... means teachings are/is good, depending on how it's being used. i got it age 11, i didnt think i would be a teacher, and now i am in my 28th year as a teacher. weird how some things work out in our lives...)


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    Post by claudicici Sat Feb 20, 2010 8:38 pm

    Thank you percy ! those are awesome...
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    Post by Guest Sat Feb 20, 2010 9:26 pm

    wow, very , very good! i like this Pax!!!! bounce
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    The power of words we write Empty Pokie and her Mushroom Man

    Post by Guest Sun Feb 21, 2010 1:40 am

    i have a cousin that likes this one guy and had been for a long time. her nickname is pokey and we nick named him mushroom man or mm.
    the 3 following poems i wrote for her.

    The power of words we write Robots10

    Pokie and her Mushroom Man



    in the robotic fields of yore

    when once upon a times existed

    lived a lovely, demure maiden

    with midnight hair thrown and twisted



    bonbons and nuts of corn

    were a part of her delicacies

    she consumed day and night

    while dancing to whatever suited her fancies



    tunes of her native descent

    would fade into the deep heavens

    to be overcome by immense stirrings

    while listening to Steve Val’s ‘touching tongues’



    what destinies are beholden

    for a love, she, “Pokie” began

    whence alighting upon the blue water,

    scented charm of the ‘Mushroom Man’



    dwelling in imaginations yon

    unto the depths of the mind

    completely engulfed there in, of

    two lovers embraced and intertwined



    he, of mysterious descent

    able bodied gent of the land

    exuded warmth and affection

    from such amorous kiss upon her hand



    wherein the land of dreams

    love ne’er needs a shiny key

    to open what has not been shut

    between the Mushroom Man, and his Pokie





    ©️Copyright 01 November 2009

    MahTame


    *****

    Pokie Rescued her Mushroom Man



    whence once upon a times from a long ago

    a remembrance trickled unto the hour of today

    Pokie unraveled the gnarlied, distorted falsehoods

    that kept her Mushroom Man at a depressing bay



    Pokie tried to rescue her discouraged man

    From the depths of a darkened despair

    A hopeless affair he thought he was in

    but with compassionate empathy she’d share



    communication was sent through wires

    echoed upon a crystalline valley below

    robotic nature riveted among its sound

    while waterfalls cascaded with thundering flow



    lifesavers were thrown through the mire

    to save him from the tangled weed

    mountains and molehills became less

    as she redirected what was his addictive need



    she’d show him about the ups and down

    in living in the crazy world he came from

    confusion would wreak havoc in his mind

    distorted the direction from where she’d come



    what’s right may very well be quite wrong

    drinking to drown out the pain of today

    or kill the memory of yesteryear’s trouble

    did he not know what her caring would convey?



    such beautimus ray of sunshine enveloped

    the depressed gray shroud he’d cloak himself

    love has no barricade when given with care

    especially when it came from Ms. Pokie, herself



    ©️Copyright 03 November 2009, MahTame


    *****

    The Plight of the Mushroom Man



    He called softly through the November wind

    Across the robotic valley beyond the watery deep

    ‘Love Me’* echoed from rocky crags of cedar canyon

    Riveted into the air waves of song in Pokies’ keep



    ‘Come unto mine heart, my precious friend

    Thou have understood the darkness engulfed in me’

    Words cannot express what a caring heart has given

    Glimpses of an amorous soul no doubt helped him see



    Citrine colors flew through the depths of seclusion

    Depressed emotions stood at a standstill below

    Beauty overcame the shroud of despair he held inside

    Encouraged the negativity to fill up his cup and overflow



    He had felt down in the dumps, wished to be displaced

    From where he has resided for quite some unknown time

    Driven and lost to leave the robotic hills of endless yore

    Away from the sparkling waters and crystalline sublime



    Charismatic light intermixed with the sun’s ray across

    Fields of nuts of corn and dancing sunflower heads

    He noticed Pokies’ concern for her Mushroom Man

    As tokens of love displayed as it continuously spreads



    Pokie led him to the very wise Elder of Gray Canyon

    Where hints of burnt cedar arose above mountain tops

    Native prayers offered to the highest realm, their Creator

    Comforted the Mushroom Man as he wished it ne’er stops



    ‘O November wind, come console this confused soul

    Cover over his darkened shroud and bring out the light

    Carry him through gentle breezes of comforting care

    Keep this young man from fleeing in his distraught plight’



    ©️Copyright 08 November 2009, MahTame

    *’Love Me’ by Enigma
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    Post by Percy Sun Feb 21, 2010 1:47 am

    You have a real gift, truly.
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    Post by Guest Sun Feb 21, 2010 3:46 pm

    Paximus wrote:You have a real gift, truly.
    thank you very much! i do appreciate your comment afro
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    The power of words we write Empty new one, inspired on my lack of knowledge in terms of crochet: Yarn Over

    Post by Guest Sun Feb 21, 2010 10:10 pm

    i have been trying my hand at crochet. i wanted to make a simple heart bookmark, but it got too confusing with all it's abbreviations. lol. thus i was inspired to write this poem:

    Yarn Over

    Go through two loops
    Over and under and out
    Supposed to make hoops
    Mine is something; no doubt

    Single, double, and triple
    Chaining every now ‘n then
    Wonder if there’s a quadruple
    Suppose to yarn over, but when?

    Granny stitches are there
    Grand-pappy didn’t get one
    Aunt Yarna tried the square
    But I think I am more than done

    Counting must be accurate
    No room for loss of memory
    Pull up ‘n spiked cluster; wait!
    Need to reclaim all sensory

    Now, let me get it straight
    Slip stitch and pull it all together
    TR to TR DEC to TP TR; it aint
    Why, oh why did I even bother!

    ©️Copyright 21 February 2010
    MahTame
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    Post by claudicici Sun Feb 21, 2010 11:06 pm

    ...even though I've been here a long time I still suck with the language,I write poems in german
    this one is written from the eyes of a child,so no big words

    RITALIN

    I sit in my classroom
    time passes by
    i wished i was outside
    i wished i could fly

    I like to draw monsters that spit fire
    with fiercy red eyes and big claws I admire
    I have too many toys so I throw them against the wall
    to see which can bounce,bounce like a ball

    My stepdad doesn't love me
    I'm not one of his
    I get plenty of spankings but never a kiss
    My mommy drinks a lot
    she's often mad
    could it be my fault? am I making her sad?

    She took me to the doctor
    he said I'm a hyperactive child
    he said that's the reason I'm acting so wild
    He gave me a pill
    A pill to make me sit still

    I sit in my classroom
    time passes by
    I listen to the teacher,i never ask why

    I want to draw monsters yet the paper stays as blank as my stare
    I have something to say but I would not dare

    My toys just sit there in my room along with my ball
    and so do i leaning against the wall

    I say "yes sir" when stepdad yells "is that clear?'
    I leave mommy alone when she's drinking her beer

    Thanks to the ritalin i'm such a good boy
    Thanks to the ritalin i'm everyones joy
    My life is so much better than ever before
    Thanks to the Ritalin I'm not bothering noone nomore
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    Post by Guest Sun Feb 21, 2010 11:28 pm

    Wow, very powerful words Claudici! I could relate to the lil boy. Ritalin helps some kids, but not all, and it's not a quick fix to settle the hyperactive child. Sometimes, simple, plain words are more powerful than big ones. I like this writing, and hope you will post more! cheers
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    Post by bandersnatch45 Mon Feb 22, 2010 8:03 pm

    Cat Haiku

    You never feed me.
    Perhaps I'll sleep on your face.
    That will sure show you.
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    Post by Guest Mon Feb 22, 2010 8:13 pm

    Alone

    I float down the river
    Bouncing from shore to shore
    Reaching out but never touching
    Grabbing but never holding


    Alone
    Always alone


    I call out; the shore turns and looks at me
    Then turns away in silence
    Looking but never seeing
    Hearing but never listening


    Alone


    The smell of blossoms in the air
    Warms me for a moment
    Before the chill settles in once more
    The sun shines on the water
    With a light that dims at every turn


    Alone
    Always alone


    The river moves me gently on
    Surrounding me, all around me
    But never staying with me
    Never a part of me


    The wind sings through the trees
    And songs fade as I go from shore to shore
    Floating down stream


    Alone
    Always and forever


    Alone





    Bill
    Bill There once was a man named Bill
    Who smiled as he stood over his fresh kill
    Because he knew he was named in the will


    Bill cleaned his weapon and put it away
    And made the house a total disarray
    In hopes the Police would be lead astray


    Bill was in luck for his plan did not fail
    The Police, thinking a robber went down the wrong trail
    Now Bill knew he would never go to jail


    But soon things went bad for poor Bill
    As his family gathered to hear the will


    Bill’s name was said right away
    And he was in shock when he heard the lawyer say
    “To my son Bill, do us all a favor, move far away.”






    I weep and I mourn

    I weep and I mourn
    for the country into which I was born
    And tears fill my eyes
    as our freedom slowly dies


    While I watch our children go off to a war
    that there is no justification for
    I hear our politicians’ lies grow bolder
    I start to feel so much older


    As I try to remember there once was a day
    before things went so far astray
    To when we honored life
    before our borders were lined with strife


    To a time when we defended what was right,
    to a time before honor took flight
    I worry about the day
    when the law will control what I say.


    So I watch each and every day
    as our freedoms slowly decay
    And I weep and I mourn
    for the country into which I was born.


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    Post by Percy Mon Feb 22, 2010 8:13 pm

    dabobkat wrote:Alone



    I float down the river
    Bouncing from shore to shore
    Reaching out but never touching
    Grabbing but never holding



    Alone
    Always alone




    I call out; the shore turns and looks at me
    Then turns away in silence
    Looking but never seeing
    Hearing but never listening



    Alone




    The smell of blossoms in the air
    Warms me for a moment
    Before the chill settles in once more
    The sun shines on the water
    With a light that dims at every turn



    Alone
    Always alone




    The river moves me gently on
    Surrounding me, all around me
    But never staying with me
    Never a part of me




    The wind sings through the trees
    And songs fade as I go from shore to shore
    Floating down stream




    Alone
    Always and forever


    Alone







    Bill There once was a man named Bill
    Who smiled as he stood over his fresh kill
    Because he knew he was named in the will


    Bill cleaned his weapon and put it away
    And made the house a total disarray
    In hopes the Police would be lead astray


    Bill was in luck for his plan did not fail
    The Police, thinking a robber went down the wrong trail
    Now Bill knew he would never go to jail


    But soon things went bad for poor Bill
    As his family gathered to hear the will


    Bill’s name was said right away
    And he was in shock when he heard the lawyer say
    “To my son Bill, do us all a favor, move far away.”






    I weep and I mourn



    I weep and I mourn
    for the country into which I was born
    And tears fill my eyes
    as our freedom slowly dies




    While I watch our children go off to a war
    that there is no justification for
    I hear our politicians’ lies grow bolder
    I start to feel so much older




    As I try to remember there once was a day
    before things went so far astray
    To when we honored life
    before our borders were lined with strife




    To a time when we defended what was right,
    to a time before honor took flight
    I worry about the day
    when the law will control what I say.


    So I watch each and every day
    as our freedoms slowly decay
    And I weep and I mourn
    for the country into which I was born.

    Beautiful! Keep em coming, we have some real artists here.
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    Post by bandersnatch45 Mon Feb 22, 2010 8:46 pm

    You must scratch me there!
    Yes, above my tail!
    Behold, elevator butt.
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    Post by Guest Mon Feb 22, 2010 8:53 pm

    Wow, I am in awe in reading these posts. the cat haiku surely has its message! and i like the poem 'I Weep and I Mourn'

    yes, please keep posting your writings! Smile
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    Post by bandersnatch45 Mon Feb 22, 2010 9:25 pm

    In deep sleep hear sound
    cat vomit hairball somewhere
    will find in morning.
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    Post by Percy Mon Feb 22, 2010 9:54 pm

    bandersnatch45 wrote:In deep sleep hear sound
    cat vomit hairball somewhere
    will find in morning.

    We have quite the haiku artist here.
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    Post by bandersnatch45 Mon Feb 22, 2010 9:56 pm

    Grace personified.
    I leap into the window.
    I meant to do that.
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    Post by Guest Mon Feb 22, 2010 10:51 pm

    bandersnatch45 wrote:In deep sleep hear sound
    cat vomit hairball somewhere
    will find in morning.
    Unless it is right on top of you as you sleep
    Not fun
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    Post by Guest Tue Feb 23, 2010 3:07 am

    I was born in a small grass hut in the African Outback. My parents at the time were Jewish Missionaries trying to save Muganga Tribe, from their way of life. My parents named me Robert but the Muganga called me Hatafanha Ah Eeka, which as I understand it means small white bundle of joy.

    All was going well until the Muganga found out that eating human flesh was not allowed in the Jewish religion. They ran my parents out of the village and into the dark jungle.

    My Mother carried me on her back in a Ruhka. A backpack made of tree leaves and small branches designed for carrying the young that was given to her ironically enough by the women of the Muganga tribe. The women of the tribe would carry their children in this manner while they moved around the village.

    My parents survived on roots that my Father dug from the ground with his Swiss Army Knife. They also picked berriers and made juice from them for me to drink.

    After 10 days my parents made their way to the coast where they walked for another 3 days until they came to a small village that had a seaport in hopes of finding a ship to take them home. There they were able to find passage on a cargo ship that would take them to San Francisco.

    Unfortunately their luck did not improve since on the way home the cargo ship was caught in a storm and took on severe damage. My parents were able to save themselves and me on a small life boat. They also saved a small amount of milk and baby food from the ship to feed me. They kept it cold by hanging it off the boat in plastic bags. My Father made a fishing pole from some of the wreckage and caught fish for them to survive on. As they were unable to cook the fish they had to eat it raw, which I think accounts for my Mother’s great love of Sushi.

    After many days we washed up on the shore of a small deserted island. There as luck would have it they were able to set up a small camp and hope that rescue planes would soon find them.

    Another 6 months passed by on the island before a cruise ship was passing by and saw my father’s rescue fire. We were all saved and were soon headed back to the States. Growing up I’ve always loved the sea and I think it must be due to all the time I spent on the ocean in my early years.

    Crossing under the Golden Gate Bridge my parents felt great joy as they knew that this part of their life could be put into the past and they could start a new life here in California.

    We relocated to San Jose where my Father took work in the Space Field as a Electronic Technician.



    Next chapter my formative years
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    Post by claudicici Fri Feb 26, 2010 3:55 am

    wow dabobkat,thanks for sharing,how old were you when you first left? do you remember any of it aside from what you were told?
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    Post by Guest Sat Feb 27, 2010 10:54 am

    What a beginning of your life, dabobkat! Looking forward to the rest of the stories!
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    Post by Guest Wed Mar 03, 2010 10:55 pm

    Barilla

    A starchy kind of crunchety-crunch
    After it’s been in my mouth for a bit
    Tis almost like stomping on dried leaves
    As they’re being chomped within it

    They say it’s not good to eat it raw
    Just try telling that to my craving
    I’ve read the ingredients on the box
    Maybe the iron is what I’m lacking

    Although this addiction is quite bad
    And it ruins your teeth and enamel
    Not just any kind of brand will do
    ‘Cause I love Barilla macaroni too well

    ©️Copyright 3 March 2010
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    The power of words we write IMAG000

    A Maiden and Her Warrior



    Whence he walked into the atmosphere

    An automatic attraction took hold of her

    Time ‘n time again his presence felt near



    Clouded skies that rained upon the land

    The sunshine of his compassion absorbed

    Unto her heart till it riveted out-of-hand



    Seasons came and went in the circle of life

    Loving memories flooded through a soul

    A maiden waited patiently to be his wife



    Sparkling waterfalls rippled downward

    Cedar aroma flowed through mountains

    As the Warrior’s hand reached forward



    Thence the Maiden and her Warrior wed

    While the night sky danced until the dawn

    The union of two harmoniously bonded



    ©️Copyright 12 March 2010; MahTame*
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    Post by wadahoot Sun Mar 14, 2010 11:21 pm

    maunsapt wrote:

    A Maiden and Her Warrior
    MahTame* *aka maunsapt

    Thanks for sharing your poetry - Lovely! Great to see you around, Maunsapt!

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